Finished revising and editing my latest short story (based on the picture above), and it’s off to my critique partner. There will probably be a few corrections/changes, but for the most part it’s done!
I have to say, I’m really happy with how quickly I wrote this one, as well as how the story turned out. I won’t share the title yet as the group at Goodreads is doing some fun stuff with guessing titles and character names.
In celebration of finishing it, I thought I’d give you guys a little preview.
Here’s a snippet:
I expected him to bend me over a piece of the matching wicker deck furniture, the table or maybe one of the oversize lounge chairs, but he didn’t. He smiled again. I hadn’t seen him smile this much in months. He looked like a dope with the silly grin and his dick rock hard. I didn’t care. It was a stunning combination.
“Race you,” he said, then jumped off the deck and ran onto the beach stark naked, heading for the water’s edge.
“Asshole,” I called out as I kicked off my shorts and shoes. I chased after him, laughing all the way to the water. He’d already made it in waist-high by the time I got there. He splashed me as I ran in. I lunged at him, and he let out a huge-ass giggle as I wrapped my arms around his chest from behind. A fucking giggle.
Wait. That hadn’t come from him. It was from me. His laugh still sounded like a guy his size normally would. It sounded great. I sounded like a kid running to get to the dodgeball first at recess. Maybe it was the sound of pure joy.
– From a new short story coming soon to the M/M Romance group at Goodreads and my website
Edited post on 7/1/11: revised the above except to incorporate final revisions.
Loved your excerpt – I can’t wait to read it and all the other stories. Congrats on completing it too! :)
Thanks so much, Sue! There are so many amazing photos I think I’ll be reading stories until the end of the year. :)
I can’t wait!! :D
Thanks, Sean. I hope it works for you.
oh, you tease….great excerpt.
LOL, Leigh. I just can’t help myself. Thanks!
Love. It.
Can’t wait til they/you/Goodreads? release it…tick tock ;)
Thanks so much, Elaine! Glad you think it sounds good. I’ll post a link here when it’s up on my site.
Oh Sloan! it sounds perfect for the pic….and that is a great picture…Wow! Canna wait to read the whole story…..those 2 could inspire alotta stories…*grin*
So far it sounds great!
hugs,
jo
Jo: Thanks! I was definitely inspired by those two. It turned out erotic and quite romantic. I hope Sean and at least a few others enjoy it. Thanks for checking out the preview.
Sounds romantic and fun too. Can’t wait until July!
Thanks, Ami! It’s definitely a sweet, romantic moment between the two. I hope you enjoy it.